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nattherat, 13 Feb 2011 05:35 am     Reply

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Khern: Reasonable request?

Fay: Incoherent babbling!

I feel desperate to ask if you guys are enjoying it or not, even though it's really only halfway in and they've only just started advancing the plot.

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EmiraBrightleaf, 23 Feb 2011 06:22 pm     Reply

OMGGGGG!!! I'm totally in love with this comic.

mAdAmeflAflE, 23 Feb 2011 08:23 pm     Reply

Keep up with the good work. THis is a really good comic so far. Its not like alot here on SJ.

Antique Doll, 23 Feb 2011 08:46 pm     Reply

loving it :) It's much different from the other comics on smackjeeves. This one actually shows character and the personalities of these two are shown through they're movement, speech, posture, and even the speech bubbles.
It's obvious that you've put a lot of thought, care, and work into this

Fang Shinobi, 23 Feb 2011 11:51 pm     Reply

It seems interesting, and I'll keep on following it. ^^,

Theorah, 24 Feb 2011 03:07 am     Reply

I'm certainly enjoying it! The pacing and visuals are enough that its entertaining right from the beginning, but now that the story is becoming more clear/the two have met, the story is getting more interesting too ^_^

Lyco, 24 Feb 2011 11:55 am     Reply

Looks stunningly gorgeous as usual. It's definitely entertaining - a good piece of advice someone gave me is that if you yourself don't enjoy the story then no one else will. So as long as you're still enjoying it, naturally we will too!

One minor thing I would say is that the colours are very dark, but that might just be my screen hehe.

SunKitten (Guest), 24 Feb 2011 01:06 pm     Reply

I am totally enjoying it and I can't wait to get my hands on a print copy :D I was really looking forward to them meeting so the last two pages have been particularly cool ^^